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'........but when she lifted the lid...'
Once there was a girl named Jenny and she was out trick or treating and she saw a creepy house on a hill.She asked her mam if she could check it out her mam said "no it is not safe."Jenny went to her room and tried to think of a plan and then it hit her she would wait until it was very dark and her mam was asleep.It was very late and her mam was asleep so Jenny left the house quietly so she did not wake her mam.Jenny made her way to the house on her way she came across a tin which was making a noise she decided to look inside to see what it was but when she lifted the lid a spider jumped out on to her shoulder.Jenny ran all the way home and never saw the creepy house.
Yesterday I was helping my Grandma put our new beautiful fish into the fish tank. But when i lifted the lid all of the other colorful fish hopped out of the murky fish tank and were flopping around on the floor like lunatics. A few minutes later they stopped flopping around. The new fish were just floating on the top of the water. When my mum came home her face looked shocked with what had happened. She starting blabbering on at me. She was accusing me for letting the fish out but it was my Grandma. Eventually the fish were put back.
There was once a little girl called Lola. Lola was with her friends Ashley, Becca, Kane, Luke and Jade. They all went to play but everything stopped there was no sound. They all went to see what was going on. They all heard a niose in a creepy vioce and in a very terrifying way. They went and they saw a creepy place and that place was where the nioce was coming from. When Becca saw a bin she went near it and the niose was louder... but when she opened the lid... BAM everyone was asleep at home and nobody new a thing what happened.
The tale of the missing sweet started 1 long day ago me and Zoe were eating sweets in the garden........then there was only 1 left so we were arguing over it for hours and hours until l it was getting late so we went inside we left the last sweet on the counter for in the morning after that we went to bed after at 6:30am we were shouting blaming each other for eating the sweet "you were so greedy eating that last sweet"screemed Zoe "I didn't eat tat last sweet you did" bellowed Emily "non of you eat the sweet" announced mum "it was the dog"! hahahahahah
One sunny day me and Emily was doing all the girly stuff in my bedroom the music was blasting out of the roof then I got board and tired so I decided to prank Emily.So I tiptoed down the creaky stairs and got one of my fake black enormous spiders and put it into the large biscuit jar. Then I shouted for Emily to come down stairs to have a biscuit I watched her get out the large biscuit jar but when she lifted the lid she screamed all I could do was laugh!
The tale of the missing sweet started 1 long day ago me and Zoe were eating sweets in the garden.......then there was only 1 left so we were arguing over it for hours and hours but after 2 hours of arguing we went to bed and Emily left it on the counter for the morning after that at 6:30am Zoe went down stairs but when she lifted the lid there was no sweet there "you ate that sweet didn't you Emily" "no actually I think you will find you ate it" "nobody ate it"said mum "the dog ate it! HAHAHAH
When I woke up on Saturday morning I looked outside. Everywhere was covered with white frost. I got up and got ready as we were going out early to my grandmas house. When I went outside into the garden I fell over as it was very slippery, so I went inside to tell my mam what had happened. I had cut my knee so my mam cleaned it and put a plaster on it. My mam then went up to the grey salt bin at the top of our street so we could get some grit for our garden but when she lifted the lid, we saw it was empty, so we had to go to the shop and buy some.
One day a small young girl called Maggie was staying at her grandma`s house. Maggie hated going to her grandma`s house because all that they did was sit and play scrabble and for tea they always had cold chicken soup. When she was at her grandmas one night she went into the kitchen and saw a biscuit tin but when she lifted the lid she saw worms and snails she dropped the tin and ran to her grandma screaming. Maggie hated worms and snails well she didnt hate them she despised them. Her grandma said "calm down Maggie"
today I bort a tub of paint from b and q. it was white gloss it smelt horrible it did not smell like gloss. it smelt like dead spiders and flys. when we were driving home my mam asked what is that smell I said it was the gloss she said that does not smell like gloss we better take a look when we get home. it took 15 mins to get home we carefully lifted the lid when she opend the lid she found dead spiders and flys. It look absoloutely horrible I put one spider under my sisters bed
One day my Mam was going to put some rubish into the wheelie bin. so she put her Shoes on and went outside but when she lifted the lid there was a suitcase inside of the bin so my Mam took it out and opened it and she had a shock but a good shock because she saw a colossal pile of money so she told me to put my coat and shoes on because we were going to spend it on anything we wanted. So we went to a shopping park and I said that I wanted a new pair of Shoes because my old ones were old. We had a good day.
Once there was a boy called Jack and his horrible sister Jane. One day they went out to play with there friends to play football for a while but after football they played tig. Jane got hungry and sneaked inside to get a biscuit but when she lifted the lid she found lots and lots of gold so she put it back and left it alone and did not tell nobody. Jane was wondering how did gold get in the biscuit tin. So she went play tig once again but soon it got dark so Jack and Jane went to bed.
I was in the woods with my friend it was really dark and spooky then we both tripped over a log then it just went all black. A few minutes later we awoke and there was a castle in front of us the door was wide open so we went in it there was candles lit and there was a long stair case leading up stairs so we went up when we got to the top there was a room we went in the room and there was a big box we thought it was treasure my friend went to open it but when she lifted the lid a huge spider came crawling out we ran out of the woods and never walked in it again.
She was so delighted with the box but unfortunately she was not allowed to open and reveal the treasures it held within, then suddenly there was a knock at the door she put the box down on the coffee table and went to open the door. She opened it and with a loud BANG there on the door step was the very box she had left on the coffee table 30 seconds ago.So in the end she opened it but when she lifted the lid out poured disease and poverty she was stung and wounded all over her face she was in pain she screamed out for help
one day i went to the shop to buy some thing for my mam for mothers day so i did i gave her it on mothers day so she said what a butiful and it was in a box the box had some butterflys on it and it had very very cute babys and very cute animals on it to but when she lifted the lid nothing was in it so we looked all over the place but we could notfind it any were so we went to the shop then we found it and we all went back home horrey now shewore it horrey
One day Juliet was cleaning out her bedroom cupboard when she came across a small, square, brown box tucked away in the corner. She became quite wondrous about what was inside! She thought it might be an unopened birthday present but when she lifted the lid she was surprised to find an ancient letter from her great grandad which dated back to World War One. Juliet read the letter it was to her grandma talking about the victory and how he was looking forward to seeing her and coming back home to England from France after a tough time at war.
One bright sunny day i went to the park and had a pinic with my family and when we got there we had lunch and i went to put my rubbish in the bin but when i lifed the lid up it was fild whith dirty water and it smellt funny so i just put it in the other bin then i went on the slide and the climing frame its was fun i helpted my little cousin on swing she all most fell of i had to cach her then i took her to the shop and she got some sweets and i bought a some sweets and a little drink then we went back home.
It was Jenny's turn to do the washing, she went the laundry room and did her normal routine of putting the clothes in the washing machine, putting them in the dryer then putting them in the laundry basket to take upstairs. But when she lifted the lid it was not just the thatched basket, it was a gateway to another dimension. A dimension filled with good and evil magic and laundry; because whenever you lose a pair of pants or an odd sock they go to this mystical land of living pants and odd socks. As Jenny reached in for a sock, she was sucked in…
One Sunday me and my Gran were looking through old photo albums we had found . There were some of me when I was a baby and of my sister Emily. Suddenly Gran found a red tin with a gold top, but when she lifted the lid we found a magnificent photo album inside from 1980!
There were photos of my Mam aged 10 and of my Auntie! I immediately ran to show everyone and Grandad said I look the image of my Auntie Julie. We had a great day recalling lots of memories and laughing at some of the photos because my Gran had a large black beehive in her hair!
One day I went to my Nana's and Granddad's house on bonfire night and they said look up! can you see the night sky with all of the stars and all of the beautiful and majestic fireworks that had just shot in to the air it was pink ,purple ,green ,blue ,brown ,black , nave ,violate ,yellow ,red and white it was totally like the rainbow and their was a bonfire night carnival just down the street so we had a walk down to see the carnival and they were dancing all over the place so we went back home.
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